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Re: New Moon Parody
New Moon Parody Characters: Bella Edward Alice Emmet Jasper Rosalie Carlisle Sam Charlie Winter New Moon Parody: BELLA: It’s my birthday today, but if you say anything about it I ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Thanks for reviewing! I changed some of the story around and I fixed a couple of other things. I'm trying to decide what should happen next... I'm not totally sure ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Sunny Side Up
This prologue was extremely short. There was very little detail. There was very little information at all. Where are the characters? When does this happen? Who are they? How old ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Who are your influences?
At the moment, only a few. But this list is always changing. William Shakespeare Philippa Gregory Jane Austen
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Saddest Book
There aren't many; I don't read a lot of sad books. Here are some that made me cry: Snow Flower and the Secret Fan (One of the best books ever. ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Diary of a Seventh grade Girl
I'm trying really, really hard to ignore the grammar. Really hard. Anyway, I thought this was interesting but it should probably be in a blog, not in the non-fiction forum. ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Bittersweet Revenge
This was excellent! I think the other reviewers caught most of the mistakes, but I have a few questions. Actually, I think the other reviewers may have asked these questions ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
February 15th, 1730 Hereford Household, Kent, England The sky was still the shade of grey that comes before dawn when I slipped silently out of bed. The fire had gone ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Darkness
Well, this is certainly an interesting story. When does this take place? Parts of it sound old fashioned, like Victorian England. Other parts sound quite modern. Also, you need to ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Screa, For Halloween
This is an interesting story. I think that it would be very good if you just fixed a couple of things. You might want to add some extra detail as ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Hahahahaha!! That was the funniest script I have ever read! Why didn't you just kill Bella? All of the series' problems would be solved if Bella were dead. But even ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the star.
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Haha thanks! I changed role to roll, and I'm working on adding more to it. I'm thinking about writing a New Moon parody because that was my least favorite Twilight ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
I'm not a very witty person. I do have a talent for sarcasm, but for some reason it it hard for me to come up with witty things. By the ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Thanks Shadowbox, but I'm not really interested in being on youtube. I'm glad you liked it though!
Jan 6, 2009
